Mystical Angels

Hows this rap. Rate 1 to 10?

You know the hip hop game needs a tuneup Rappers come in and out like they turnin up on a corner, uh huh That was cool then but yo then I heard a rumor uh huh Your crew was rollin wit the White Cliffs of Dover uh huh Well let me tell ya how we do it in Californ-ya We might have you on the run just like a puma Girl you want it I got it Your body is a narcotic The thought is autoerotic And your style is quite poppin Can I get it on credit Or maybe better on debit I know ur Visa I’ll bet it Take it as far as you’ll let it hope that this spot will get hot That its ready to pop Dont even look at the clock All of ur problems forgot It's time to rock till you drop Go feel the force and just flock To the big center of the party’s bass drummers C mon! We live the a masterful life and its mythical Feel its chords and its vibes ain't typical Do what you want It's alright this mystical time u got That is a lot of this principle If you stay in this moment its critical Let the music mix ur brain stem’s chemicals Make u feel like ur spirit's invincible Im centrifugal reachin up to your pinnacle now C MON! Feel the connectitives, energy, disprojected the weighted The whole collective consciousnesss rise like helium oh Groovin’ out of the question Dont disrespect him, but Our style's f---ing posh like David Beckham C MON

Public Comments

1. 7
2. 6
3. youve tried to hard to make it rhyme it sounds childish as fuck, most rap's only rhyme on every other line and some dont rhyme at all, it just needs to fit the beat, a little rhyme is cool but dont over do it.
4. lolz i likeee it. ummm 9.5 yay!!!
5. 4. It's got random phrases.
6. its kind of weak dogg.im not trying to hate.just do what you do.
7. i loved that last line went from 6 to 7
8. And you think i will read that.
9. Compared to modern professional Rap? Its Multitudes better However, for you. Thats not a good thing Modern professional rap is, By definition, Crap. So what you have there, is not good by ''Rap'' Standards.
10. 5.5
11. 4.....a little corny....get rid of uh huh and c'mon....some things don't rhyme it's o.k. though...keep workin on it
12. 7.8....come up wit some more original lines and it could be a 9. Some wack lines....."you're style is quite poppin", "it's ready pop", "it's time to rock till you drop".......P.S. my rhymes don't waver at all...I don't use these cliche lines
13. The first 6 bars suck but everything after than is pretty tight.
14. Ok this is ok if your just seeing if you can rhyme i dont know if this was susposed to be like a song or what but it feels to mixed up and doesnt match. The lyrics dont belong together but you can rap just learn to keep stuff that makes sense together instead of this.
15. i give it a 10 . i actually like it . u got talent .
16. Dude, I will give it a 10!!
17. 4
18. hahaha you gotta be f'ing white man i only like one line Feel the connectitives, energy, disprojected the weighted but it doesn't rhyme with anything all it need is a quirky beat and you got youself a BRad single