Mystical Angels

Can anyone suggest some tips/cards for my Yu-Gi-Oh! deck?

I wanted to make a Spellcaster/Zombie Deck... These are the cards I already have in the deck, but I know it needs some tweaking. I'm leaning towards a "DARK" deck, and since this deck is for friendly play, I don't care if certain cards are "Forbidden"; I don't play exactly by official tourney rules. I do, howver, request a total card limit of 65. 1 Pot of Greed 1 Skull Invitation 1 Book of Secret Arts 1 Dian Keto 1 Ryu-Kishin Powered 1 Gravekeeper's Curse 1 Call of the Mummy 3 Compulsory Evacuation Device 2 Ryu Kokki 2 Regenerating Mummy 1 Mystical Space Typhoon 1 Skull Lair 1 Sword of Dark Destruction 1 Tsukuyomi 1 Ultimate Offering 1 Dark Blade 2 Magician of Faith 2 Magic Jammer 1 Sorcerer of Dark Magic 1 Swords of Revealing Light 1 Spirit Barrier 1 Ceremonial Bell 1 Vampire Lord 1 Hammer Shot 1 Sakuretsu Armor 1 La Jinn 1 Double Coston 1 Change Of Heart 1 Negate Attack 1 Mystic Plasma Zone 1 Witch of the Black Forest 1 Monster Reborn 1 Vampire Genesis 1 Zombyra the Dark 1 Enchanted Javelin 1 Spiritualism 1 Wall of Illusion 1 Summoned Skull 1 Ookazi 1 Trap Hole 1 Dark Magician 1 Skilled Dark Magician 1 Ominous Fortunetelling 1 Magician's Valkyria 1 Seven Tools of the Bandit 1 Getsu Fuhma 1 Dragon Zombie 2 Apprentice Magician 1 Graceful Charity 1 Block Attack 1 Giant Trunade 1 Man Eating Treasure Chest 1 Violet Crystal 1 Jar of Greed 1 Curse of Dragon 1 The Wicked Dreadroot That's my deck; if you know how to make it better, fell free to say what cards to add and which cards I should take out. Sorry, I wrote this at 11:00 last night, so forgive me for being an amateur with the list. I don't know where I could find "the old ban lists, but I'm looking at following the rules from rulebook 3.0.

Public Comments

1. Other than your not following the advance or even traditional ban list, your deck is plain outdated, random and horrible. You need a theme, thisis just plain random with useless normals like dark magician and such, I advise getting a strucutr deck 3 times and make a deck otu of those cards. Next time, when you post your deck, please put it in Monsters spells traps format, because reading it like this is just an eyesore.
2. Firstly, split up the list into monster, spell and trap cards, so that people can reed it. Second, the maximum deck size is 60 cards, so you can't have 65 even if you're going for a tradition/unlimited format. Smaller decks, however, are better, so you want 40 cards, 42-43 at absolute most. Third, your deck is running a lot of older normals monsters with low ATK, and has no theme or focus. If you want to make a Spellcaster or Zombie deck, try getting three copies of either the Spellcaster's Command or the Zombie World structure deck, and combine the best cards from each pack. Also, you really should look at the banlist. Even if you don't plan to play competitively, the list is there to help make the game balanced. If you want, you could also build a deck based on the traditional format, which doesn't ban anything, but restricts the most powerful cards to one.