Mystical Angels

Can you rate my non tournament yugioh deck and tell me how to make it tournament?

cards:60 monsters:24 gorz the emissary of darkness summond skull dark ruler ha des x2 swift gaia the fierce knight lesser fiend x 2 goblin attack force x2 giant orc archfiend soldier dark blade opticlops x2 witch of the black forest x3 mask of darkness trap master man eater bug magician of faith penguin soldier night assailant armed ninja spell: 19 axe of dispair change of heart riryoku tribute to the doomed shield crush horn of the unicorn black pendant soul exchange heavy storm twister premature burial book of moon pot of greed allure of darkness mystical space typhoon offerings to the doomed lightning vortex mystic plasma zone trap:17 nightmere wheel trap hole negate attack magic drain jar of greed magic jammer sakuretsu armor bottomless trap hole mirror force threatening roar magic cylinder seven toold of the bandit x2 torrential tribute call of the haunted security orb scrap iron scarecrow this is a just for fun deck fiend based clearly what do you think how can i make it better and how to make it tournament style?

Public Comments

1. first cut it down to 40 then check for a ban list(i dont remember every banned card.) then check your deck against decks like yours.:)
2. If you want a tournament legal deck then check out yugioh-card.com and look at the forbidden/limited list. However your deck right now doesn't look good, it's a jumbled mess of cards and is trying to do way too much in one deck. Base your deck around a central idea and go with it. Deck Rating 2/10.
3. take out these cards swift gaia x2 goblin atk force giant orc armed ninja trap master night assailant riryoku soul exchange twister x2 seven tools of the bandit(why you would want to lose 1000 LP i have no clue unless you're running a LP healer deck)(hard to make btw) any banned cards run with it at a local tournament and ask people who beat you what you can do better. who knows, you may find someone who may give you cards for free(but dont expect it)