Mystical Angels

What do you think of this draft to describe a spiritual mystical island?

October the 19th. The destination had been set. It was this island we were going to explore; a place where the beauty was far beyond what could be assimilated as it deviated from any sign of reality. A place where the harmony of nature counteracted the interaction of matter and space. A place that our senses confirmed what the sub-consciousness didn't approve. According to legends, this island could be perceived as just a product of imagination. With that being told, it had no more subsistence than an illusion or hallucination that reunited both normality and abnormality to work in one individual place. When the logic counterfeited the entire picture of possibility, it left us to reason to believe.

Public Comments

1. Not good. It sounds like you just opened a thesaurus and started copying words. I couldn't really follow the story after the word "explore" Have a rewrite and make it tight and concise.
2. Even with all your words, it is too VAGUE. Why is the beauty far beyond what could be assimilated...? Describe more, make the reader want to come along.