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plz help me with my zombie yugioh deck it needs help and i want good answers on what to take out/what to add?

this is my zombie deck it needs help do you think you have what it takes to make the great zombie deck? well then give me some advice monsters 4star and under 3x pyramid turtle fear from the dark double coston castle of dark illusions 2x regenerating mummy spirit reaper 2x soul absorbing bone tower 5star and up 2x vampire lord 2x ryu kokki dark dust spirit 2x despair from the dark patrician of darkness vampire genesis beserk dragon magics snatch steal card of safe return mystical space typhoon giant trunade nobleman of crossout heavy storm 3x call of the mummy 2x book of life wasteland premature burial lightning vortex deal with dark ruler traps sakuretsu armor trap hole torrential tribute dust tornado tutan mask magic jammer call of the haunted ps no ban cards and help me take out cards add cards i want no more than 45 cards in deck

Public Comments

1. Don't put that many tribute monsters, get some monarchs, jinzo, cyber dragon and spell canceller
2. Well first, you want to add more 4 star monsters. You probably want to take out a couple 5+ star monsters. You also want to add a couple more traps like magic cylinder and magic drain. You also want red moon baby in there too(monster card).
3. u should only hav 40-50 cards in ur deck for a 40 card deck.. 20 monsters (15 4star and under and 5 5star and up) 15 magic 5 trap u can change that to 10 magic and 10 trap if u want
4. My Suggestion to you would be to take out the vampire lord, and vampire genesis. Cards that require specific cards for summons, are going to hurt you more than help you. I speak of coarse from you deck. It works for other situations. Nothing more from me.
5. my best advice is first what cards you need to lose: get rid of the castle of dark illusions, the fear and despair from the dark, berserk dragon, and deal with dark ruler, and probably also the double coston and the patrician. the vampire genesis and dark dust spirit are a little iffy as well, as they're probably not going to get out there to help you as much as you would think. definitely add more 4 star and lowers, whatever your choice is. probably a morphing jar, sangan, more spirit reapers or such would be helpful. add in a jinzo/spell canceller or both for support. remember, your deck doesn't have to be completely zombie to work as a zombie deck. oh yeah, get rid of the wasteland. add in a smashing ground.
6. you should add vampire mistress, remove heavy storm, and remove 1 pyrimid turtle.
7. --with the banning of graceful charity you are already at a disadvantage... find a suitable repplacement... lucky that strike of neos is coming out in english soon... go get "card trader" spell card to recycle your cards in hand and to use the effect of pyramid turtle effectively.... --yes with spirit reaper... --are you going the path of deck thinning strategy as a back up??? if you are sure go with soul absorbing bone tower, vampire lord and if you can add vampire lady... --but if you prefer strength bone tower will not do... --take out genesis, double coston, castle of dark and berserk dragon... --koki is always good to be there and despaire especially with call of the mummy... --if you will go pure zombie that will be difficult but if you do consider to put "extras" do place a sangan or two tomatoes in there for the search (or is giant rat better???) --assuming you want to go all zombie and seeing that you are brave enough a player to try using berserk dragon, castle of dark and genesis... why not play instead 3 skull servants and 3 king of the skull servants??? or spirit of the pharoah??? but id rather go with te skull servants.... --recap... 2-3 skull servants, 3 king of the skull servants, 2 soul bone absorbing life, spirit reaper, 3 pyramid turtle, 2 ryu koki, 2 vampire lord, 2 vampire lady, 2 despair from the dark... thats 20 monsters... oh and if there is still space maybe 1-2 des lacooda for the draw power... --graceful is really needed in the zombie... hmmm what to replace it with???? the discard power is really needed... find a suitable replacement... --so obviously book of life is needed x2.... call of the mummy x2... if you want a boost wasteland is not really good... go with axe of despair or better yet play 2 copies of H-hero heart... weird but hey the pass tru damage will work... --mystical and storm yeah i guess... --prema and call yeah... --torrential yesssss --remove trap hole and magic jammer... maybe use waboku x2 to protect your des lacooda and get that draw --it would be great if you will place creature swap x2... this is to swap your turtle for your opp's monster then the old one-two destroy and special summon then attack.... --sooooo... recap..... 2 creature swap, 2 book of life, 2 call of the mummy, mystical space typhoon, heavy storm, premature burial, call of the haunted, 2 waboku, torrential tribute, dust tornado, 2 sakuretsu armor or a mirror force, axe of despair or 2 H-hero heart... ---the rest i leave to you... if you want snatch steal play in there book of moon as well... ---help i hope i did....confuse you i hope i did not.... hrmmmmmm..........